Sunday, December 11, 2011

Chapter Five: A Coyote

"What did you say, Wolfrock?" Asked Canyonwolfy when Wolfrock returned to the other wolves. Wolfrock had told the news to the first wolf in sight.
"Dawn was eaten by a river-monster!" Wolfrock repeated, almost crying. And what would we tell Fire and Flame? She added silently to herself.
"What's going on?" GreatShot walked over.
"Dawn was eaten!" Canyonwolfy told GreatShot.
"She was?" GreatShot gasped in disbelief. "What should we do?"
"I believe this river-monster should leave our reserve!" Canyonwolfy stood taller. "We can go fine without any monster trying to eat our own kind!"
"What could we possibly do about it?" Wolfrock said.
"I'll think of something," Canyonwolfy promised, and walked to some other wolves.
"He'll think of something," GreatShot assured Wolfrock.
Wolfrock was bored once again and went out into the reserve. A rabbit was out and about. She did not know how to hunt well, but was determined to catch something.
The rabbit was not aware of Wolfrock's presence, and carried on eating grass.
Wolfrock jumped to the rabbit, but it scurried away. She tried chasing it, but the rabbit got away.
"Wolfrock! What were you doing?" Came a voice.
Wolfrock turned around to see GreatShot coming. "I was catching a rabbit."
"You do not catch rabbits like that," GreatShot told Wolfrock, sitting down. "You may be a pup, but if you'd like, I can show you how to catch a rabbit yourself."
When Wolfrock was about to reply, she heard something growling. GreatShot had got to her feet. Wolfrock turned to see what it was, and saw a wolf-like creature standing there.
"A coyote!" GreatShot growled just about when Wolfrock was going to ask what it was.
To Wolfrock, it looked as if GreatShot was going to jump on the coyote. But then, Canyonwolfy came and jumped in front of it.
"This is our area!" Canyonwolfy snarled at the coyote, and they started to fight.
"Come on, Wolfrock! We need to get back!" GreatShot shouted over the racket, and WolfRock followed GreatShot to where the other wolves were.
A river monster, then a coyote? What are we going to do? Wolfrock thought to herself. When they were nearing, Wolfrock shouted, "Canyonwolfy needs help!"

An Author's Note:
 I am sorry I did not carry on with the river-monster story, but I thought it would be a good idea if the wolves were having trouble with many problems all at once.

9 comments:

  1. Thanks, tiggerkat!

    Wolfrock, I hope you like this chapter. I can't wait to write another.

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  2. I wish I could help write it! That would be very cool! -devyn786

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  3. i like it- good idea! i think that its really cool to kinda add another danger into the story. it also makes the story sound more real and possible.
    some things you might want to know about coyotes and wolves:
    1. coyotes are smaller than wolves.
    2. coyotes cant hunt very well and most often steal their food.
    3. when a coyote comes near, it will do one of three things- [if theres food] fight, [if there isnt food] run away, or [if the animal looks small, hurt, old, sick, young, and weak] pounce.
    4. IN REAL LIFE, COYOTES ARE COWARDS.
    5. wolves, even pups like Wolfrock, can take down most coyotes single-handedly.

    hope you are ok with me rambling on like this!
    -doctor magiclily

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  4. also, this chapter is way better than i ever imagined it would be (no offence, Wolfrock.) so dont beat up on yourself thinking its bad.
    be proud of your work!

    -doctor magiclily

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  5. ps. i regret making Dawn the eaten one- but hey, rather her than Wolfrock or GreatShot!

    -doctor magiclily

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  6. Cool facts! Since you approve, armadillo, I can guess that Wolfrock would like it too. Those facts helped! I guess I should make this coyote a fierce one, since it stood having to fight with Canyonwolfy. I cannot wait to write a new chapter! I love to write on this blog! A Full Eclipse is the most epic blog EVAH!

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  7. Ya, you're right- better than GreatShot or Wolfrock. I could never forgive you if GreatShot was the victim! (Just kidding). XD!

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  8. Hey, armadillo, I know you're not Wolfrock, but do you know what Wolfrock said about when you could be able to make a chapter? Or was it just about anytime? Cuz I love to write on this. :P

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