Thursday, September 22, 2011

Chapter 2: The Shot

Wolfrock sighed quietly to herself. She had lived in this part of the world, but it seemed unfamiliar. A valley stretched far across the way she could see. "Hello!" Wolfrock looked behind her. It was a rabbit. Wolfrock just ignored her. She wanted to roll in the green meadow, so she could feel relieved once again. But she knew she had to continue. Suddenly a white shape and brown one shot out of nowhere. The brown shape was a wolf, the white one a rabbit.  The wolf caught up with the rabbit, and delivered a killing bite. The wolf proudly held it up. A human came and took it from her mouth. This wasn't a wolf. This was a dog. Dogs lived with humans. Humans killed wolves.
Wolfrock had the sense to hide, but she didn't know where. Only a tree with fresh, beautiful leaves was there. Even so, the dog would sniff her out. Her only instinct was to run. The human already had its strange rock shooter pointed at her. She ran. The human shot. All she could feel were her feet get heavy. Heavier and heavier...and she got slower and slower. She slipped and went crashing into the ground. "Oh, rotting meat!" She insulted herself. She was dead. For sure.She could smell the dogs scent. This dog was the long-legged type. They were fast.
Suddenly she felt a sudden pain. She knew this wasn't the strange, smooth rocks the humans shot. It was like a thorn. She felt her eyes get heavy, and she drifted off.
Author's Note:
I am sorry this is so short. I thought it might help a little bit. The next chapter will be bigger! 

4 comments:

  1. YES FINALLY!!!! did you take my advice? seems like it. :)

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  2. Snickety ArcticNinjaNovember 2, 2011 at 6:21 PM

    Can I be in it?
    Snickety Ninja
    Female
    a jet black with gray markings.
    naturally stealthy, a good spy and
    lying is in her nature. A kind soul, just not always pointed in the right direction. Fierce and witty

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  3. Snickety ArcticNinjaNovember 2, 2011 at 6:29 PM

    Can i be in it?
    Snickety Ninja
    Female
    A natural spy. Very sly and stealthy. A born actor. A kind soul, just not always pointed in the right direction. fierce, but witty. is jet black with gray markings. Always the one with a plan. mature for her young age (in human years: 10-12

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  4. I check here every day 4 the next chapter.

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